Fifth Draft

Learning To Be A Professional Author


Break It Down

Where I break down stories (books, comics, TV, movies, video games) and see what hopefully makes them work.

New Dad Binge-Watch: Harley Quinn

Did I mention the blood, swearing, and antics?

New Dad Binge-Watch: Cautious Hero: The Hero Is Overpowered but Overly Cautious

That theme song.

New Dad Binge-Watch: Steven Universe

Like, I get it? I get it. That doesn't make it good for me.

New Dad Binge-Watch: DuckTales Season 2

Even MORE beautiful stuff.

New Dad Binge-Watch: DuckTales Season 1

Beautiful stuff.

Watching A Lot Of Television

Hopefully, these guys learn to grow up soon and stop acting like babies. Seriously.

Break It Down – The Issue With YA Books

Do you have the "Dumbledore Effect" in your book?

Harley Quinn and the Confusion Caused By Overly Ambitious Trailers

This is a little all over the place, but that's this trailer in a nutshell.

Break It Down – Marvel Movies’ Critical Mistake

I have something to say about Marvel movies.

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