Fifth Draft

Learning To Be A Professional Writer


Break It Down

Where I break down stories (books, comics, TV, movies, video games) and see what hopefully makes them work.

New Dad Binge-Watch: DuckTales Season 1

Beautiful stuff.

Watching A Lot Of Television

Hopefully, these guys learn to grow up soon and stop acting like babies. Seriously.

Break It Down – The Issue With YA Books

Do you have the "Dumbledore Effect" in your book?

Harley Quinn and the Confusion Caused By Overly Ambitious Trailers

This is a little all over the place, but that's this trailer in a nutshell.

Break It Down – Marvel Movies’ Critical Mistake

I have something to say about Marvel movies.

I Don’t Watch Game Of Thrones And I Thought Last Night Was Fine

Because that's what a story does. It's supposed to to make you feel something. Be it anger or sadness, it's succeeded

Break It Down – WrestleMania 35 Ending

I don't know what it means to be a wrestling booker, someone who writes the storylines and lays out the matches for professional wrestling, but I'm going to give it a shot.

Break It Down – Joker Movie Trailer – “Put A Smile On”

Is stunned the word you use when you don't know what else to do and just need to write a blog post

Break It Down: Soul Eater, Season 1

See, that's a problem with an overabundance of television shows. Something has to keep your interest, catch you, snag, hook, hold your attention

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