Getting this one out quick.
Every nook and cranny and item was clear to see and I thought, "How is he doing this so I can steal his powers?"
Objectively, these two sentences both say the same thing. Our friend Jamie has an affinity for french fries.
So, as one of my writing warm-ups, I'll give myself a challenge of writing a basic, "packed" sentence and do what I can to "unpack" it.
Fifth Draft 